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Pyramids Out of Nowhere


                         Ali, Paige, and Ariana were walking home from school when Ali found a  big hole (and the only reason she found it was because she almost fell in it) .Then Paige found it. Yet Ariana (though she saw her best friends stop) fell in it ! As the other two girls tried to pull her out they fell in as well. " Ali, Ariana I don't think we're in Georgette anymore!!!"Payge told her two best friends." And why is ........... yeah we're soooo not in Georgette anymore!!! " Ali said. All three girls walked out of the dark part of the hole (that they fell into). " Have I been missing the fact that Georgett is or has been a desert ?!"  Ariana asked franticly and still confused.    They were all still confused. Then all of the sudden, a pyramid just appeared out of nowhere but before they could talk about it they were inside the pyramid with know way out!"Hey do you see that figure over there?" Ali asked her friends. "Nope, do you, Ariana?" Paige said. "Hey you over there. What's your name or at least who are you?" Ali all of the sudden said."The name's Zack, I've been here a month, and so if I were you  I would at least try to get to the eye, the Red Eye, to be exact. That's where you'll find the control room and turn off the off button. That's how you get out." the boy said." Then how come you didn't do it your self ?" asked Paige."Non of your business" Zack said. "Then what about food and water?" Ali then asked. "Easy. All you do is say what ever you want food, water, or anything that has been or will be made." Zack answered."Well we should start walking. " Ariana said. So off they all went. By the end of the night they where about two thirds of  the way there. The next day Ali and Payge were the first ones wake up and they wanted to find the control room and tell their friends about what they found. When the rest of them were awake Payge and Ali got back. Then Ariana said, "I remember seeing what you just said. In a dream."  So as they walked to the control room they listened to Ali , Payge ,and Ariana . So the three girls lead the way. Finally they reached the control room. As Ariana, Paige, Zack, and Ali pulled the leaver that set them free a ghost pulled them away from it so Ariana grabbed the leaver and set them all free!! The girls where sad that there new friend(Zack) would never see them again. The next day the girls went to school.They where surprised to see that the new student in there class was Zack! At the end they all lived happily.Oh you want me to say they lived happily ever after.What fun would that be?  Who am I you ask well that's for me to know and for you to find out! But here is a hint, I found the hole first. Good Luck!!!!!!!!!!!!    

 By : Ali
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